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PostSubject: Egress Uchiha   Wed May 20, 2009 1:16 am

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Name: Egress Uchiha

Nickname/Alias: Dark Raven of Konoha

Weight: 96 lbs

Height: 6"3
Age: 15

Gender: Male
Looks: Egress has brown hair, a black uchiha shirt with an uchiha crest covered by a konoha jounin suit with an uchiha crest on the black and black marks all over the suit. Egress wears black ninja leggings like a regular jounin adn has a mask similiar to kakashi's.
Personality: Egress is usually serious and takes care of the people important to him. He's serious and completes all of his missions. Egress has survived many deathmatches in his life and has a warm spot and watches all over the village and his students. He only swores to protect his clan and destory all those who opposes his life and village. He always gets angry wheneevr he's around Senju clan members and one of his goals is to destroy them for treating his clan like slaves. However, to do so he must seek ever greater more power constantly and rank up as a ninja, even at the cost of his own village, he must turn sides and join an infamous organization to complete all of his personal goals.


Clan Information



Clan Name: Uchiha

Kekei Genkai: Sharingan

Clan Symbol: the Uchiha crest

Clan History: The Uchiha clan were one of the founding noble families of Leaf village. The clan itself is said to be descended from the Hyuuga clan who possess the bloodline of the Byakugan eye. Because their clan possessed the Sharingan or "Wheel Eye," the Uchiha excelled at being able to read and fend off attackers. This made them prime candidates to help found the Konoha Military Police Corps. The organization itself would go on to incorporate the Uchiha fan symbol into their official logo.

Select few members of the Uchiha clan possess the ability to activate the bloodline Sharingan eye. This doujutsu (eye skill) gives one the ability to read Genjutsu, Taijutsu and Ninjutsu and then defeat it. As such, the clan member can view a technique being performed and see the tricks and movements required to be able to complete it. However the clan member can not copy techniques which are unique to another bloodline. It also gives one the ability to cast jutsu techniques only possible by possessing the eye.

The clan itself is known for their ties to fire. For a clan ninja to be seen as an adult, they must be able to utilize a Katon (Fire Element) jutsu such as Goukakyuu no Jutsu. Thus is the tie between the manipulation of fire and the mind of an Uchiha member.


Rank Information:

Rank: Jounin

Village: Leaf


Skill Information:

Skill Specialty: Ninjutsu and Taijutsu (weaponry/genjutsu is good as well)

Elemental Affinity: Lighting and Fire

Special Characteristics: He can summon the Great Bird Gashimoro- a terrifying black giant bird that specalises in Raven Ninjutsu and the Sage arts. Egress is an excelelnt ninjutsu and his taijutsu is good, his genjutsu with sharingan and his weaponry skills with kunai, shuriken, and wires are excellent. HE works on other jutsus as well protects his village at the cost of his own life. He has Sharingan.

History:
Genin Arc:
After graudating top of his class, Egress gets ready with his teammates for ready-made missions. He has attended tens and tens of D-ranks and C-ranks, but unsastified with the lack of real action. That is until their sensei puts them in the Chunin Exams. Egress passed the first test thanks to his Sharingan. And the 2nd Exam he reelashed his inner power- the Curse Wolf Shift Mark and also recieved an unknown unused mark given of to two strangers. In the 3rd exam he had defeated an Aburame. On the 4th Exam, he survived with 4 ninaj left standing and went promoted to chunin. Egress activated his sharingan soon enough.

Chunin Arc:
Adding to a different cell with other chunin he began to take on B-rank missions. On his life on the battlefield on infiltration and espionage, Egress survived amazginyl and completed all of hsi missions. egress has now been recgonzied as a chunin. However, due to a certain espionage with different cells against the Land of Lighting, the Cloud Village declared war against the leaf Village, beginning the 4th Great Ninja War. Egress was promoted to a Special Jounin in the Espionage and Infiltration Corps. Due to a certain capture of mission plans was oen of the causes of this 4th Great Ninja War, futurly resulting in the deaths of many people and the test of his life, Egress must risk his own for the village. Egress now has a full ordinary sharingan.

Jounin Arc:
Egress was promoted to Jounin after a final A-rank mission with another Jounin. This mission was also a S-rank mission, Egress must pass enemy lines and assasinate a Cloud Jonin- who posses as a threat against the entire village. To get this, he must kill his closest friend- a relative of a Jinchuruki in order toget Mangekyou Sharingan. He pracice with his new ocular powers and discovered new ways to use them. He also figures the Jinchuruki is now after him, seeking revenge against hsi fallen brother. Due to his increase of strength, Egress was able to succed in his mission, with no life lost. After the 4th Great Ninja War, Egress completed a finaly S-rank mission that ended the war, kidnapping the Raikage and bring him to a hidden base belonging to the leaf village between the Sound village and the Rice fields. Then the Leaf Village will interrogate him adn sign a peace treaty- ending the war. Egress barely escaped with his life, using his Sharingan to copy the Raikage's raiton jutsu, Egress was able to defeat a kage, however he suffered extremely massive damage and wounds. However, he was able to complete his mission and brung an end to the war. Egress won a S-rank status and earned his name in the Bingo-book.Egress now looks like a normal Jounin ninja and swears as his duty to protect his comrades and everybody important to him.

Rp Battle Samples:
naruto Life:
" I'll back you up"

"'Earth Style: Head Hunter Groundhog Jutsu (Double Suicide Decipitation Technique)"

Egress heads and travels underground.....
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Egress's hand appear out of the ground and pulled fredo down to the ground up to the neck. The fire came closer and reached fredo, the flames concealing and burning him....

Egress swifted away to face nami and harry...

"Sharingan!"

Time for the real battle to start
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'What a massive compression of chakra..." Egress analyzed...

"Time for my best jutsu.."

"Chidori! 1000 Birds!!"

With Zero aiming for Nami, Egress aimed for Harry.

With both of the jutsus connecting..... thr fight will be over....
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Egress dodged all those kunais but had two cut off part of his hair...

Another mystery ninja......

Shame all three fo your other comrades have died.....

Egress glares his Sharingan at him.....

Hmmm, something feels familiar abotu him.... he thought


Naruto Way:
Sharingan!
Lighting Blade!
Egress charges in and stabs a rib of SonicWave's
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Egress performs a mixture of handsigns
Fire Style: Great Dragon Inferno
Two huge dragonheads appeared in each hand. Egress goes underground and throws the huge dragonheads up from the groundhole upward to SonicWave, the dragonheads flamed SonicWave's body, but missed as the heads fly away.
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With SonicWave distracted, Egress teleports away.
"Body Teleportation!"
His whole body teleports back to Konoha, using a diserable amount of chakra.
Lord Dread, I have the plans!

My First Day at Naruto Life:
Egress Uchiha walsk into the academy of the twilight Village. He enters the classroom adn sits upon a desk... He suddenly notices a great ninja before him... " Hello, I wish to become a ninja of the Twilight Village

You may call me Egress- Egress Uchiha, orphan of the Leaf. And what may i call you, sensei? (Zero-sensei?)


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PostSubject: Jutsus   Wed May 20, 2009 1:22 am

Ninjutsu: (sorry if i didnt put up enough information on my jutsus. Im just too lazy to copy it from Leafninja and paste it since i have to click on multiple links)
(raiton)
Lighting Blade(Raikiri)
Rank:S
The most powerful of the series the blade is powerful enough that the original user was said to cut a blot of lightning in half before it hit the ground. It increases power and accuracy.

Chidori Nagashi
Rank:A
A jutsu that doesn’t require hand signs only focus. Using current there will be a very noticeable lightning aura coming off you. It also shocks anyone that gets near you. You can also extend the any weapon you
have as large as humanly possible without adding on weight. A field of lighting outside the body will shock and paralyze nearby enemies.

Chidori Senbon
Rank:A
A jutsu used to form Chidori into lighting needles. These needles probably takes on Chidori's characteristics, including it's ability to cut through most anything which stands in its path.

Chidori Eisou (Chidori Sharp Spear)
Rank:A
You form a chidori and form it into a spear. Then you extend this spear into a body part of an enemy, paralyzing and numbing the enemy.

Chidori Transforamtion
Rank:A
a jutsu used to form lighting into any object and use this object to extend to parts of the enemy to numb him. However this lighting form could only extend to a certain length. Transformation the chidori into a lighting sword is a very effective way to shock and attack the enemy.

Lighting Blade Wolf
Rank:S
A jutsu used to form lighting into a wolf. This wolf will discharge at its target and attack enemies- however it has a limited range.

Lighting Shadow Clone
Rank: A
A jutsu used to form a shadow clone into lighting. This clone will be powerful than a shadow clone becasue of its elemental property adn share the same traits as a shadow clone. Once the lighting shadow clone dissapears, it will discharge into lighting and stun a nearby enemy.

Chidori Stream Release
Rank:A
A jutsu used to run chidori through the user's body- healing any wounds on his/her body and deflecting any attacks. The user can therefore avoid mortal injury. User could also run the chidori against tools and metal objects, amplyfying their attacks.

False Darkness
Rank: B
A jutsu used to blast a huge bolt of lighting at enemies from the mouth. This attack si equally strong as the Raikiri.

Lighting Strike Armour
Rank:A
A jutsu used with the Lighting Elemental Sword. Running a Raikiri with the sword, the user spins the sword above his head and the lighting will tense up, surrounding the user in a barrier. Then the lighting will take form as a body armour and protect the user from attacks.

Lighting Dragon tornado
Rank:A
Form from lighting, earth, or air into a spiral lighting dragon. This dragon is like a water dragon but is made of lighting and a few drops of wind. The dragon will then strike its enemies- crumbling them. Another version could be a longer lighting dragon from a Lighting jutsu releashed from the user's own body.

Static current:
Rank:B
Discharging an electric current in your body. Whoeevr touches you will be shocked and paralyze according to the amount of static it has.

Thunderclap (Lighting Ball)
Rank:A
The user will form a Chidori in his hand and held out a lighting sword. Then the Chidori will chirp louder into a thunderclap. Then this Chidori Thunderclap will mix with the lighting sword and from the top of the tip comes out a huge lighting ball. This ball could be thrown at an enemy.

Kirin
Rank:S
User can first launch fireballs into the sky above using his Gouryuuka jutsu, to increase the Kirin jutsu. These fireballs will warm the atmosphere and create a powerful rising air current, which in turn generates thunderclouds. Sasuke will then form Chidori and raise his arm to the heavens. This will allow him to channel the lightning down upon his target. Because he is merely channeling the naturally created lightning, he is able to utilize a power greater than what a ninja could create with their own elemental chakra. Because this is also natural lightning, it will travel more quickly than any ninja could dodge. Upon calling down the lightning, it will create a powerful impact with a large amount of destruction.

Four Pillar Binding
Rank"A
The user forms handsigns and four large earth pillars will rise from the ground and surround the target. Then Lighting will be releashed from this pillars and will shock and stun the target. This jutsu could be used in al elemntal trio jutsu and is useful for trapping.

Static
Rank:C
A weaker version of Chidori current when used a almost unnoticeable lightning aura forms and will protect you by lashing out at the nearest person. It can also be used to extend your weapon...

Lightning pump up
Rank:B
Draws raw energy from your lightning as it increases you reactions tenfold. But well only last for 5 posts after that you will have an aftereffect from moving that fast. You will recover in 2 posts…


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PostSubject: Jutsu   Wed May 20, 2009 1:24 am

Ninjutsu
(Fire and Ninja Art)

(Ninja Art)
Shadow Clones
Rank:B
The user create clones out of his own shadow and tie the user's expiereince and own power. These clones can channel chakra to each other and assist the user. However, any mortal injury to these clones also reverts the pain back to the user.

Transformation Jutsu:
Rank:E
The user uses this jutsu to transform into an object or another person. How well replicating and convincing the transformation is depends on the user's overall power.

Subsitition:
Rank:E
The user can avoid upcoming attacks by switching positions with another object- commonly a nearby log. The user could avoid coming injuries and can use this technique as a "clone'.

Ninja Clone:
Rank:E
Regular clones that are inferior to the original. However no pain is inflicted.

Release!
Rank:E
A jutsu used to escape a genjutsu illusion.

Summoning Jutsu
Rank:B
The user makes a contract with an animal. Then the user can summon the animal anytime and anywhere he wants to aid him

Sharingan Triple Windmill Blade
Rank:C
Using the developed vision of the Sharingan eye, the clan member hurls three Windmill Shuriken which have wire attached. While in the air the clan member can manipulate wire to make the blades circle the target, which results in the attached wire binding them. These wires could be mixed with fire style jutsu.

Body Flicker Jutsu
Rank:D
Using the speed of the user and teleportation skills, the The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance. This allows the user to move at high speeds without being seen and teleport to another location.




(Fire Style)

Fireball Jutsu:
Rank:C
A common jutsu utilized by Uchiha clan members. The user holds chakra depp inside their throat then they exhale it and blow a huge flame or a condensed ball of fire.

Dragon's flame
Rank:C
A jutsu used to form fire into a long dragon-shaped strike and blast it through an enemy or through wires attaching to an enemy. This jutsu is dangerous and can be transformed into a long huge blast of dragonfire at an opponent (the larger version is called Fire Dragon Flame Bullet)

Phoenix Flower
Rank:C
A jutsu used to expel fire into massive amounts of comet spheres of fire at a target.

Fire Clone Jutsu:
Rank:B
A high level jutsu used to make clones out of fire. These are stronger than shadow clones and lighting shadow clones. These clones could use thier own fire body chakra to string fire style jutsus and channel fire chakra to each other. Anyone who touches these clones will be burned. Also the clones could flame up a nearby person.

Fire Dragon Bullet
Rank:C
The user blows a long flame.

Exploding Ash Technique
Rank:B
A user holds chakra into their gullet. Then they expel a huge dusty clodu of ash at the enemy. When the user bites down their teeth the ash ignites into superheated fire bomb.

Flame Bombs
Rank:C
The user blows a jet of fire from his mouth.

Great Dragon Fire Technique
Rank:B
A high level jutsu where the user blows out big fire "dragonheads" filled with large amounts of chakra. These fireballs could punch through concrete and depending on the strength of the user metal as well. This jutsu has an intense harzadous heating source.

Running Fire
Rank:B
The user must be able to draw Fire chakra and enhanced it. Then the user will then spin around in mid-air and generate a circular ring of fire what will jet around the target and surround them and then blaze them up or the user could throw these rings of fire at an enemy. This jutsu could be made stronger with other fire type jutsus or wind type jutsus.

Misty Flame Sand Waltz
Rank:C
A jutsu the user uses to blow a large gas-ingnited combustion mist, when this gas hits fire, the fire will be transformed into a sea of flames.

Cranium Carver (Head Mincing Pain)
Rank:B
A high level jutsu where the user releashes out a huge flaming mass of fire. Then the user blows out this flame and it would quickly spread around the enviroment and burn everything in its path.


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PostSubject: Re: Egress Uchiha   Wed May 20, 2009 1:25 am



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PostSubject: Re: Egress Uchiha   Sun May 24, 2009 2:49 pm

Firstly, you can only have two elements. Chosoe two, remove jutsu that aren't of these elements.

Secondly, I'm afraid you will have to put rank information into your jutsu. From what I know of them, you have exceeded the limit for S ranked jutsu, too.

If you wish to be a high-ranking Jounin, you need to have a great deal more in looks, personality and I cannot even find a character history or RP sample, both of which will need to be a decent length.

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PostSubject: yoooooooooooooooooooooo   Tue May 26, 2009 12:31 am

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PostSubject: Re: Egress Uchiha   Wed May 27, 2009 2:43 am

Teleportation Jutsu: No.

Four Pillar Binding: Let's say, A rank for this.

Thunderclap: A rank.

Lightning Dragon Tornado: A rank.

Lightning Strike Armor: B rank.

Lightning Shadow Clone: B/A rank.

One other thing - the sample RP isn't quite what we need. We need more of a narrative, for example (a post I made on this site):

It had been a mere hour since the sun had risen over the trees, mountains, rivers, towns and villages of Konoha. Even before this, however, Yuki had begun her journey, crossing the expansive Fire Country in a couple of hours in order to reach her destination. The Arena was a grand location. An enormous circular sparring ground with dusty earth and a scattering of a few trees, it was the epitome of shinobi arenas. There was even a small, man-made stream running around the edge of the ground, providing a water source for Suiton users. Then there was the stalls. Towering high over the battleground, thousands upon thousands of spectator seats were ready for any official events that brought the crowds in. Standing at the edge of one of the talls arena walls was a slender figure.

She, for it was a woman, hopped down and landed deftly on the ground. Walking over the the nearest tree, of which there were only a few, she leaned casually against it. The woman was dressed in a pale blue outfit that reached just above her knees. She had a white undergarment on, which could just be seen where the blue dress-like garment split into two 'tails' just after passing her waist. Speaking of which, a pale pink sash was tied around her waist, too. Her silvery, white-blue hair was less radiant under the shadow of the tree, but still startling enough to be seen from a good distance. It had been a fleeting thought, a passing fancy that had brought the woman here. Though she had planned to pass it, she hadn't decided to see if someone was there too until the last moment. She would wait, not for too long, for an opponent.

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PostSubject: Re: Egress Uchiha   Wed May 27, 2009 3:05 am

Hmm, could you give me a example?
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