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PostSubject: Hana Shizuka. {Jounin.}   Wed May 20, 2009 3:26 pm

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Name: Hana, Shizuka. [華 静夏]

Nickname // Alias: Han, Ha.

Age: 20.

Gender: Female.

Weight: 110lbs.

Height: 5'6"ft.

Appearance:
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Standing at 5'6, Hana is the perfect weight for her height and age. Her limbs are long and slender, her body is slim and curvascious. Her body also appears to be fairly muscular, but nothing extrodinary. From many days of training, her skin holds a light tan to it. Messy auburn locks of hair cascade to down to her shoulders, framing her heart-shaped face perfectly. A crimson colored pair of eyes peer out from behind thick eyelashes, making them the most noticeable feature on her face. Multiple scars are on her back, but usually they are covered up in bandages unless wearing her typical uniform. She can often be seen wearing either the same or similar-styled outfits, although it is more common to see her in a Kimono. It is always halfway open, exposing her chest and stomach which are wrapped in tight bandages. The sleeves are always rolled up, the edges of them rimmed with a red band. To top it all off, she wears a black pair of knee high boots, without a heel so she doesn't slip and fall about.

Personality: Explaining each little detail about the female would be complicated, it is never certain on how she will act to her surroundings. But all in all, she isn't the type to go around cussing and screaming unless provoked to that level. At times, Hana tends to be a girl of few expression. It gives people the wrong impression, like there is nothing up in that head of hers, yet, she is more intelligent than others give her credit for. Usually she can be lazy, and would rather spend her time standing around doing nothing. Nevertheless, she tries her best with everything she does and works hard. It is true, she is a sucker for love and will fall head over heels for any guy that treats her nice. Although, that doesn't mean that a man can just bring her flowers and get to her heart. No matter how much someone annoys her, she can't even begin to hate them. Rarely will someone ever hear her say, "I hate you." towards anything, and even still, she wouldn't mean it at all. That doesn't mean anyone can walk over her either, try it, and it would be quite easy for her to walk all over the said person, literally. The bad thing about Hana is that she holds grudges, and when she does finally hate someone, she hates them, there is no forgiving after that. Now, that doesn't make her a bad person, or even someone who will hate on name basis. For her age, she is as mature as she should be, and doesn't nag like most would expect. As far as working in groups or teams, it can get a bit out of control. She usually doesn't work, and ends up bossing everyone around and being generally frustrating. If she doesn't think anything is right in a discussion, she will not let her say go unheard. Observant as ever, and nearly always optimistic, this female knows how to act as the situation calls in battle. Normally she will take her time, play with her opponent for her own amusement and take note on how they 'work'. But, if it is for the protection of her village, or anyone in that village, she will fight literally untill her body is broken beyond it's limits. Digging a little deeper, and that is when people get to see the real her. It isn't clear what she does with her deep down scared emotions, but she bottles them up. Now, Hana can seem indestructible on the surface, but it only takes one little thing to make that bottle shatter. It takes a matter or hours and days to put the peices back together: rebuild herself from the inside. Every shatter leaves a scar on her mind, twisting and twisting those little clogs further more. As someone gets to know her better, more and more peices of her personality unwind.


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Rank Information:

Rank: Jounin.

Village: Konohagakure.


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PostSubject: Re: Hana Shizuka. {Jounin.}   Wed May 20, 2009 8:34 pm

Skill Information:

Skill Specialty: Ninjutsu- Genjutsu.

Elemental Affinity: Fuuton- Doton.

Special Characteristics:


Jutsu

Ninjutsu;
    Name: Kaze Ya no Jutsu. {Wind Arrow Technique.}
    Rank: D-Rank.
    Type: Ninjutsu.
    Element: Fuuton.
    Description: The user molds chakra in their breath while inhaling. They then blow out and an arrow made of wind is shot from the user's mouth in one blast. The arrow cannot be blocked, but it can easily be dodged. Only one arrow is created at a time.

    Name: Fuuton Kaze no Sebon. {Needles of the Wind.}
    Rank: C-Rank.
    Type: Ninjutsu.
    Element: Fuuton.
    Description: Gathering air within the palm of their hand, and mixing it with chakra. The user transforms it into sharp and deadly needles. These needles are very small and are almost invisible unless in direct sunlight. Because they are made of air, they cannot be blocked, but dodged. Only five needles can be made at a time, per hand.

    Name: Fuuton Furyuu no Jutsu. {Wind Dragon.}
    Rank: A-Rank.
    Type: Ninjutsu.
    Element: Fuuton.
    Description: This creates a large dragon formed from wind. The dragon looks like a large serpent, a traditional Chinese dragon that is twenty feet long. The color is not distinct because the wind manipulates it from its color to transparency. This is sent towards the opponent, the victim if not quick enough to react: will be sucked into the dragon, it will seem as if he or she is stuck inside a tornado. This deals a great amount of damage.

    Name: Kuchiyose Kirikiri no Mai. {Summoning Skill: Execution Whirl.}
    Rank: B-Rank.
    Type: Ninjutsu.
    Element: Fuuton.
    Description: After the user wipes their own blood on the area in front of them or on the offensive weapon they intend to use for the attack, Daikamaitachi No Jutsu is prepared as normal. But instead, when the wind is released, a large summoned weasel, as well as a long pole, two short sickles and a container becomes shaped out of the wind. This is a much more intensified gust of wind that is able to chop down trees with ease.

    Name: Fuuton - Daitoppa. {Great Breakthrough.}
    Rank: B-Ranked.
    Type: Ninjutsu.
    Element: Fuuton.
    Description: This is a Ninjutsu which utilizes the Wind Element. Inhaling large amounts of air, chakra is used to expand the lungs to take in more of the air. After their lungs have been filled to the max, the user will blow a large blast of wind capable of leveling almost anything in its way. This jutsu can cause internal bleeding if the user uses it too much, or haven't used the jutsu enough.

    Name: Hikui Tenkuu Assaku no Jutsu. {Low Air Pressure Technique.}
    Rank: A-Ranked.
    Type: Ninjutsu.
    Element: Fuuton.
    Description: This technique makes the air pressure in a room drop dramatically, causing anyone inside to fall asleep, anyone able to not fall victim to this jutsu's full effects: will experience their body feeling heavy making it hard for them to move. It can only work in an enclosed area like a building or room. It takes a lot of concentration to perform this with so many people in the room.

    Name: Doryuu Taiga. {Earth Flow River.}
    Rank: D-Rank.
    Type: Ninjutsu.
    Element: Doton.
    Description: Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will travel through the ground to appear below their target. They will then surprise their target by then pulling them into the ground. Once in the ground their target is thus immobilized.

    Name: Retsudo Tenshou. {Revolving Split Earth Palm.}
    Rank: C-Rank.
    Type: Ninjutsu.
    Element: Doton.
    Description: Retsudo Tenshou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. When the ninja forms the needed hand seals and slams their palm to the ground, surrounding rock will begin to churn and twist up crushing all those trapped within it.

    Name: Shishi Nakigoe. {Lion's Roar.}
    Rank: A-Rank.
    Type: Ninjutsu.
    Element: None.
    Description: The user performs the right handseals and sucks in a huge amount of air into their chest so much that it looks like it is expanding past its limit. The user will let out a scream of vibrating sound. The roar is so powerful; it can pierce through unprotected ear drums that are too close and even knock normal projectiles away.

    Name: Kyougiri. {Vibrating Cutter.}
    Rank: B-Rank.
    Type: Ninjutsu.
    Element: None.
    Description: Taking their bladed weapon at hand the user sends chakra running through their blade. The flow of chakra makes the blade vibrate at a high speed increasing the cutting power of the blade. Because of the chakra running through the blade looks like a blue blur. The constant chakra drain however is very demanding.

    Name: Kekkai Hojin. {Barrier Encampment Method.}
    Rank: B-Rank.
    Type: Ninjutsu.
    Element: None.
    Description: Arrays of four explosive tags are jointly placed around the boundary of an area. If anyone or anything happens to walk through the boundary, the seals will instantly activate and explode, injuring or even killing the imprisoned target.

    Name: Hateshiganairyuu. {Eternal Dragon.}
    Rank: A-Rank.
    Type: Ninjutsu.
    Element: None.
    Description: After making a long row of seals, the user is able to summon a cloud of chakra which will then consume elements from the surroundings of the user to form a dragon. This dragon is controlled solely by the user and can cause huge amounts of damage and destruction to any given target.

    Name: Kawara Shuriken. {Roof Tile Shuriken.}
    Rank: C-Rank.
    Type: Ninjutsu.
    Element: None.
    Description: This technique requires chakra to pressurize nearby tiles in an area. The tiles are then levitated and hurled over towards the opponent, spinning at fast speeds similar to shuriken.


Genjutsu;
    Name: Niseshi no Gijutsu. {Art of Fake Death.}
    Rank: A-Rank.
    Type: Genjutsu.
    Element: None.
    Description: This genjutsu only works while being attacked by an opponent with something deadly. The genjutsu uses the last attack and creates am image where the user fails to finish creating a jutsu in time making the attack look like a success and completely killing the user. The whole illusion is made to lure the opponent into a false sense of security for a sneak attack, or to make a hasty retreat if necessary.

    Name: Karada no Rinchi. {Beating of the Body.}
    Rank: B-Rank.
    Type: Genjutsu.
    Element: None.
    Description: After making eye contact after concluding handseals, this jutsu makes the target feel like physical blows are being landed all over their body, while no actual damage is done, the user may twitch uncontrollably in reaction to this Jutsu.

    Name: Shi kara no Sasayaki. {Whispers from the Dead.}
    Rank: C-Rank.
    Type: Genjutsu.
    Element: None.
    Description: The effects of this sound based jutsu makes those entrapped hear the voices of lost loved ones or family or friends they hadn't seen in a long to be saying awful things about them and their constant failures. As well bringing up dark secrets from their past to instill self doubt in the one trapped.

    Name: Omosa. {Weight.}
    Rank: C-Rank.
    Type: Genjutsu.
    Element: None.
    Description: This technique increases in potency over time. Each post, the opponent will feel like their clothing, tools, weapons, and generally anything they carry, has doubled in mass. This can cause targets to start slowing down, or against those rather weak against genjutsu, may even cause them to grow tired.

    Name: Chiru. {Chill.}
    Rank: D-Rank.
    Type: Genjutsu.
    Element: None.
    Description: The user sends a chill down the spine of their opponent for a moment, making them temporarily feel fear. The feeling is done before the other can realize it is genjutsu. Usually done in accordance with something like looking the other in the eye, it can have various affects on the opponent's mind.

    Name: Hachi Sasare. {Bee Sting.}
    Rank: D-Rank.
    Type: Genjutsu.
    Element: None.
    Description: This genjutsu makes the target feel as though they have been stung by a bee, creating a throbbing pain at a location of the user's choice.


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PostSubject: Re: Hana Shizuka. {Jounin.}   Wed May 20, 2009 8:35 pm

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History:

Starting Off.
    From the very start, this child was going to have a short life as it seemed. Konohagakure was her birth place, in the middle of summer too, but it was raining heavily that day. Due to some complicated birth problems, her mother passed away. Now her father, don't get him wrong, he tried his best to bring her up. Although, it was clear that he didn't take that much liking to her. So, one day, a mission was appointed to him from the Hokage themself. To proud to reject, her Father accepted, leaving his child all alone. Days passed, then the news came. On that very mission, her Father had died fighting. Sure, they didn't have a strong bond together, but, he was her Father, the only person in her life, and now, he was gone. It was hard, people blamed her for the death of one of their highly respected Jounin. The Hokage was too kind-hearted to let this go un-noticed, and brought it upon themselves to make sure that this child would have a good life. Renting out a small appartment for Hana, he made sure that she had a roof over her head and something to eat.


Academy Years.
    The idea of becoming a Ninja was put into her head with a small conversation with the Hokage. It wasn't even an hour later that Hana began to train like crazy, and soon she entered the academy. At first it was a struggle, and at times she couldn't even make time for herself. It all payed off in the end though, which was a good thing. Progressing to the top of the class, Hana was proud of herself. Even the Hokage came to praise her. There was nothing that could put her down, that was untill it came to the teams. Being stuck in with the two lowest of the class wasn't hard, but she would have to work around it to show everyone that they had doubted her! This was where she started to boss her team about, get into constant arguements and get into trouble from her teacher. Even still, her team passed, all becoming Genin.


Genin Years.
    After becoming a Genin, the training got tougher. Hana took it upon herself of the sucess of her team. Up untill now they hadn't got their act together, but finally they started to train with Hana, not treating her with kindness and respect. One night after Training, her Teacher took her to meet the Hokage. A Fuuton expert stood beside the Hokage. The Hokage had brought in a Nin from another village to help train Hana even further, it was nice, too nice almost. There was no way she could fit all this in with her current training, but she managed, again, not spending anytime on relaxation and only on Training. After enough training, her team were enrolled into the Chuunin exams. It was a struggle for her team, but they managed to push through with a few 'soft-jabs' from Hana. It was clear she was the leader figure in the team. Only two of her team passed, her and her seemingly best friend. Keyword: Seemingly. It had only been recently that they had decided to hang out together, or even speak without getting into an arguement.


Chuunin Years.
    Progressing into a Chuunin was easy, and she felt if she took a Jounin exam now, she would pass with flying colors! Her Training got serious, there were even times where she didn't return home for three days. This was working her to death, but she was determined to become something. At first, the Training with her team stopped, all her time going into training with the Fuuton element. In no time she mastered most of the Techniques, like the Hokage thought she would. Now everyone started to respect her also, not blaming her for her fathers death anymore. It confused her, how suddenly all the villagers turned nice. Still, she didn't argue. The Jounin exams were coming up, and Hana had full confidence in herself. Enrolling herself in the exam with her team-mate she wasn't fully aware she had to do it alone. And that was the tricky part. It took time and effort but she eventually passed with full marks. Out of the 4 Jounin seleted at the end, she was one of them. It might of been selfish to think like this, but she didn't need her team anymore, she didn't want them to be honest! After all this, they started to go back to hating her, which was pretty much what she expected in the end.


Becoming A Jounin.
    This was the best part of her life! Hana didn't need to spend so much time training anymore, still, she did need to so she didn't fall behind, but now she could actually spend some time having fun. The Hokage was proud, and sent her their respects. From here, the only way was up! Sure, her team didn't respect her anymore, and would do pretty much anything to make her land on her A**, but that didn't matter. Now the mission were rolling in, this continued for quite some time. All of them being difficult she spent most of her time away from Konohagakure, her home. Finally, when she was allowed a break, a easy mission was forced upon her, and she was promised as much time as she wanted off after that! Accepting it with every hope of getting off, Hana went on the mission to collect something from another Village. Lucky she was with other Jounin, or she would of been lost! Getting the item her group made the journey back to Konohagakure. In the middle of this journey, they were ambushed by Rogue Nin. There was only four of them to begin with, making it easy to eliminate them. Then more and more arrived, untill they were in groups of ten at a time. And one by one, her group fell, all taking fatal blows. This was it, wasn't it? All Hana could hope for was a miracle, it wasn't like she feared death, but she would rather avoid it for as long as possible. Out of a whole group of 6 Jounin, she was one of the two to survive. The whole idea of trying for an higher Rank was cut off from her mind after that inccident.


RP Sample:
    Training. That was all that ever happened now in this Jounin's life. There wasn't much point to it really, but it gave her a purpose. Now, it wasn't one of the bestest days to train. It had been raining for days, not days, weeks! Well, that was the whole point of training, learning how to fight as the situation calls. The ground was soft, damp, and loose, any wrong movement and she would slip. Rain cluttered her body, mixing in with the red liquids known as her own blood. Slowly her chest raised, then dropped, repeating these motions. It took a lot of energy out of her each time she trained, but each time she was able to last a little bit longer, and that was all she could ask for. A smirk formed on her blood stained lips, reaching down to the pouch strapped securely onto her thigh. Unclipping the top of the pouch, her fingers wrapped themselves around a few sebon. While bringing her arm back at full speed, the sebon laced between her fingers, ready to be thrown at her target. Standing not even a couple of meters away was a clone, a full solid clone identical to herself. Everything was in proportion, the hair, the eyes, even the scars running along her sides. Now throwing her arm forward at full force, the sebon were realised, heading towards the clone at high speeds. Hana could of made a few wind sebon, but there would be no point in that. The clone was only as smart as her, and would know how to move and avoid the attack. Countering the sebon were a few kunai. Knowing perfectly fine that the clone couldn't immitate all her jutsus, Hana threw her hands together, performing the needed handseals. "Fuuton Furyuu no Jutsu." A low whisper slipped out from between her lips.

    The clone froze, blankly staring at Hana with no emotion. Forcing her hands forward, a gust of wind blew out, slowly forming into a large dragon shaped figure. The clone continued to stand there, doing nothing. The dragon dashed towards the clone, twisting and following the clones movements. Speed was everything, the clone, not being the quicker one was quickly engulfed within the cutting winds. Hana dropped her arms back down at her sides, blood dripping down from them. Without the proper concentration, it was easy for her to screw up this jutsu and harm herself, much like she had just done. As soon as the winds cleared up, a mangled corpse remained. It was a sucess. That was her Training over for today, all she could do now was return home, and just fall asleep. The droplets of rain grew heavier, cleaning out the fresh cuts on her arms. Dragging her feet across the ground she made her way over towards her stuff, hoisting her bag over her shoulder and now heading in the direction of the village. Now, she couldn't say that training was always painless, most of the time that was all it was filled of, pain. Eventually, she would become someone, and if that meant training like this day in and day out, it was all worth it.

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PostSubject: Re: Hana Shizuka. {Jounin.}   Sun May 24, 2009 2:26 pm

Shintenshin no Jutsu is a secret Yamanaka clan technique, so you can't have it without being of that clan.

Just to make sure you understand - Kirikiri no Mai summons a weasel. This will be your contracted summon if you choose to have this technique. Also, what weapon are you using to smear the blood and summon it?

Lastly, there are strict rules in place about the use of Sozo Saisei. It requires a good month or two in between uses (in RP time, that is). You will also only be able to use it once in this time. Finally, you will need the "Reversed Seal: Release" to use this technique (the chakra storage seal), which is also S rank.

Other than that, very impressive application!

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PostSubject: Re: Hana Shizuka. {Jounin.}   Sun May 24, 2009 7:47 pm

Ah, alright.
I'll remove that Technique, I kind of got a little confused and decided to throw in whatever. Sorry!
I was planning on making a weapon to use that Jutsu, so I'll go make one at this moment.
I guess I'll remove the Sozo Saisei, and I'll find something else if you don't mind~
Editing on it's way!
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PostSubject: Re: Hana Shizuka. {Jounin.}   Wed May 27, 2009 3:05 am

No problem, the application looks fantastic as is, but I'm sure you want to add some more powerful techniques. I'll await the edits eagerly, then!

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