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PostSubject: Uchiha Shigeki [Elite Jounin]   Wed Jun 10, 2009 3:55 am

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Name: Uchiha Shigeki

Nickname // Alias: Shig or Streak because he is a black streak when he is fighting

Age: 19

Gender: Male

Weight: 167 lbs

Height: 6"1

Appearance: Shigeki has a average build jet black hair (ignore the picture) in a fohawk style when in serious battle he will wear the armor he is wearing in the photo other wise he wears a red t-shirt with white plaid shorts. He is not to tall not to short but just right and unlike other shinobi he doesn't wear blue sandals he wears yellow. Under his eye is a scar which goes over his nose form when he was a genin.

Personality: Loud not shy care free and relaxed will never hate you unless he has a very good reason and even then he will be a little nice. Speaks whatever comes to his mind and never backs out because his nindo is fear no one and live life free

His hobbies are soccer,fighting , training and reading. If you ever encounter him you will almost never see him quiet because he is very talkative
he likes sweets fruits and stew hates veggies and thats all.

some people will call him lazy but hes not he is just a very relaxed person he is actually very active but usually he does not train or run around in front of people he doesn't like people respecting him he likes it when they like him. So if you walk up to him and bow down he will get mad he doesn't like to be treated special he thinks all people should speak their mind a be treated equally. He almost never concentrates goofing around or having fun except when somebody's life is on the line then he focuses you don't want to witness him like that this is half the reason he became a elite jounin


Clan Information

Only complete if relevant

Clan Name: Uchiha.

Kekkei Genkai: Sharingan - Copying Wheel Eye Sharingan is the blood inheritance limit of the Uchiha Clan. The Uchiha are said to be descendants of the Hyuuga, with the Byakugan changing into the Sharingan over time. This doujutsu (eye skill) gives one the ability to read Genjutsu, Taijutsu and Ninjutsu and then defeat it. As such, the clan member can view a technique being performed and almost instantly memorize the movements required to be able to complete it, including the needed chakra moldings and seals used. However the clan member cannot copy techniques that are unique to another bloodline and the clan member must have a body capable of meeting the chakra and physical requirements to do the jutsu. This rarely stops the clan member though, as such stressful situations often push their limits farther and allow them to harness their full potential.

The Uchiha clan member is not granted the Sharingan at birth; it is only activated later in life, typically during a time of emotional stress in the heat of battle. The Sharingan itself can be transferred to another non-Uchiha by a medical ninja, such as happened with Leaf ninja Uchiha Obito to his teammate Hatake Kakashi. Because his body was not born to carry the Sharingan, the eye is always activated and it burns Kakashi's chakra when used. To lessen the impact of the Sharingan on Kakashi's body, he normally keeps the eye hidden and out of use. Also of note, is the fact Kakashi, a non-Uchiha, was able to advance the Sharingan from two tomoe to three tomoe after gaining the eye.

The Sharingan itself contains three tomoe (comma). A higher mastery of the Sharingan can be seen in the creation of a new tomoe in the eye, with three tomoe being the typical highest form of the eye. The rare Mangekyou form is a unique evolution of the Sharingan beyond the three tomoe form, please see its entry for more information. An eye possessing two tomoe can allow the Uchiha clan member to track the movement of an opponent and do some minor copying of an opponents attack. For avoiding incoming attacks, the Uchiha's speed and agility will greatly control whether they can move to avoid it. However, three tomoe will greatly help in this area.

Two tomoe will also allow the ninja to pierce Genjutsu and see the surrounding reality for what it really is. It can also allow the member to pierce another’s body and see their chakra. While the eye is not refined enough to see the tenketsu and chakra circulatory system like the Byakugan, it can view the movement and flow of chakra. This can help them tell if a person is trapped in a Genjutsu, or if an attacker is a real threat or merely a bunshin.

An eye containing three tomoe will allow the ninja to see the image of an attacker’s next move from the slightest muscle tension in their body. This prevents wasteful movement and allows the Uchiha clan member to conserve much needed chakra in battle. It allows them to synchronize their movement to strike at an area moments before their opponent is even in that spot, essentially allowing them to strike out and hit their opponent before they're even there.

Three tomoe also grants the Uchiha the ability to do Genjutsu and hypnosis after locking eyes with an enemy. This can be used to cause their opponent to do an attack of the Uchiha's choosing. This hypnosis can also be used as a Genjutsu counter, which is the ability to turn a Genjutsu spell back upon the original caster without the requirement of forming any handseals.


Clan Symbol:


Clan History: The Uchiha clan were one of the founding noble families of Leaf village. The clan itself is said to be descended from the Hyuuga clan who possess the bloodline of the Byakugan eye. Because their clan possessed the Sharingan or "Wheel Eye," the Uchiha excelled at being able to read and fend off attackers. This made them prime candidates to help found the Konoha Military Police Corps. The organization itself would go on to incorporate the Uchiha fan symbol into their official logo.

Select few members of the Uchiha clan possess the ability to activate the bloodline Sharingan eye. This doujutsu (eye skill) gives one the ability to read Genjutsu, Taijutsu and Ninjutsu and then defeat it. As such, the clan member can view a technique being performed and see the tricks and movements required to be able to complete it. However the clan member can not copy techniques which are unique to another bloodline. It also gives one the ability to cast jutsu techniques only possible by possessing the eye.

The clan itself is known for their ties to fire. For a clan ninja to be seen as an adult, they must be able to utilize a Katon (Fire Element) jutsu such as Goukakyuu no Jutsu. Thus is the tie between the manipulation of fire and the mind of an Uchiha member.

Rank Information:

Rank: Elite Jounin

Village: Kohonagakure no Satu; Hidden leaf village


Skill Information:

Skill Specialty: Because of his Uchiha bloodline his
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Genjutsu

Elemental Affinity: Like most Uchihas his main is fire
Main:Fire
Sub:Raiton

Special Characteristics: Even if the chances are 00.1 to 99.9 he will do it so basically he takes big chances. His speed is just over average even though he is not a Taijutsu user. Because he is a Uchiha he uses up too much chakra to quick and his chakra control is below elite Jounin it is mid rank normal Jounin. He is also a fireball master as he grew up living with fireball masters.


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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Shigeki [Elite Jounin]   Wed Jun 10, 2009 3:55 am

Jutsu

Name: Grotesque Darkness
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu
Duration: 10 posts
Description: This will cause the area around the target to be enveloped by darkness. Once inside the black space, the target will see grotesque figures said to be tortured criminals, the previous victims of the technique. These grotesqueries will reach out and grab a hold of the target. They will then be thrown into the void to the mercy of a spectral dragon. The horrifying demon can even extend from the targets own body to attack them. All aimed at transfixing the victim with fear and shock while the user herself chokes and kills the target.


Basic jutsu
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.

Name: Henge no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu. The transformation jutsu is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on the inexperienced ninja.

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This technique creates intangible copies of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy, this jutsu allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.

Name: Genjutsu Kai
Rank: E-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu
Rank: E-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily boost the user's reflexes. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance between the user and their intended destination.

C ranked Jutsu-
Name: Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire-Katon
Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilzing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.

Katon jutsu such as this are seen as a rite of passage into adulthood for Uchiha clan members. Once the member can manipulate fire, they are finally recognized as no longer being a child.

Name: Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire-Katon
Description: Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai.

Name: Ryuuka no Jutsu - Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: katon • Ryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After binding the opponent, the ninja uses a guide wire to unleash a large torrential fire burst onto the target. Sorry about not being three lines.

Name: Sharingan Soufuusha Sannotachi - Sharingan Windmill Triple Blade
Rank: C
Type: Weaponary
Element: None
Description: Sharingan Soufuusha Sannotachi is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by the Uchiha clan. Using the developed vision of the Sharingan eye, the clan member hurls three Windmill Shuriken which have wire attached. While in the air the clan member can manipulate wire to make the blades circle the target, which results in the attached wire binding them.

Name: Bunshin Bakuha - Shadow Clone Explosion
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None.
Description: Bunshin Bakuha is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Uchiha Itachi. At first glance the clone appears to be a normal Kage Bunshin, but Itachi can detonate the clone at any time to form a very large explosion.

Name: Magen • Kyouten Chiten - Demonic Illusion • Mirror Heaven and Earth Change
Rank: B-S
Type: Genjutsu
Element: None
Description: Magen • Kyouten Chiten is a Genjutsu technique unique to the Uchiha bloodline Sharingan holders. Using the copy and counter functions of the Sharingan eye, the Uchiha clan member can stop the sensory spell cast on their body and reverse it back on their opponent.

Name: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: Kage Bunshin is a Jounin level Ninjutsu technique. When Naruto stole the scroll of seals, he learned this technique as well. The normal Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance. The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. This is especially true when used with Tajuu Kage Bunshin.

Name: Karin
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton
Description: Kirin is a Ninjutsu technique developed by Uchiha Sasuke out of the original Chidori technique. Sasuke will first launch fireballs into the sky above using his Gouryuuka jutsu. These fireballs will warm the atmosphere and create a powerful rising air current, which in turn generates thunderclouds. Sasuke will then form Chidori and raise his arm to the heavens. This will allow him to channel the lightning down upon his target. Because he is merely channeling the naturally created lightning, he is able to utilize a power greater than what a ninja could create with their own elemental chakra. Because this is also natural lightning, it will travel more quickly than most ninja could dodge. Upon calling down the lightning, it will create a powerful impact with a large amount of destruction.

Name: Chidori Eisou - Thousand Birds Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: lightning
Description:Chidori Eisou is a Lightning Element technique developed by Uchiha Sasuke. Sasuke is able to shape the Lightning Element to form an extending blade of lightning. Though unstated, this blade probably takes on Chidori's characteristics, including it's ability to cut through anything which stands in its path, allowing the sword to strike its target with ease. This attack may also be similar to Chidori Nagashi, causing the target to go numb from the electrical charge.

Name: Chidori Nagashi - Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: Chidori Nagashi is a Ninjutsu technique developed by Uchiha Sasuke out of the original Chidori technique. Instead of merely focusing the electrical force to his body, Sasuke is able to extend it outside of his body and through objects which he is holding. This allows him to create a protective zone around his person. This zone of electricity can shock and immobilize his foes, presumably by attacking their nervous system.

Name: Gouryuuka no Jutsu - Great Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon-Fire
Description:Katon • Gouryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete.

Name:Kakashi's Lightning Wolf Technique (Unnamed)
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton-Lightning
Description:This unnamed Ninjutsu technique utilizes the Lightning Element. After creating Raiton in his hand, Kakashi will send out a wolf made of lightning to attack his target. Lightning will run from Kakashi's hand to the wolf itself, limiting its range.

Name:Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu - Mist Waltz Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon -Fire
Description:Katon • Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals and then proceeds to blow a large combustible mist at the target. When the mist hits flame, it will ignite in an explosion of fire.

Name:Karyuu Endan - Fire Dragon Flame Projectile
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description:Katon • Karyuu Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals and the proceeds to blow a large jet of fire from their mouth.

Name:Kokuangyou no Jutsu - Journey into Black Darkness Technique
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/M
Description:Kokuangyou no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique which causes the ninja's opponent to be enveloped in total darkness. While in the black void, the ninja will be unable to see any incoming attack or threat.

And sharingan three tomoe

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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Shigeki [Elite Jounin]   Thu Jun 11, 2009 7:17 am

History: Childhood Arc
Shigeki was born in kohona and still lives with his family in the same house that he was born in. Shigeki was born into a family of superb ninjas with each of his family members graduating Academy early people were always saying that his family was getting stronger with every generation and it was true because Shigeki's sister who was Jounin already had two tomoe sharingan(I know it isn't much in the current naruto but this is before where everybody isn't op). So Shigeki grew up being first in his academy class and everybody saying that he would achieve fully activated sharingan and maybe even mangekyou sharingan. Shigeki hated it because he was just a kid and he didn't understand it and some people even lied and said that they saw a little red in his eyes.

One day another boy said "EEEEEEWWWW your eye's are red" Shigeki went berserk he just couldn't take it any more he beat the boy up to a bloody pulp, pretty obviously the boy went home crying and Shigeki's father was there. Shigeki was enrolled into academy school early because his father saw serious ninja skill for a 4 year old.


Academy Arc

When Shigeki found out he had to go to ninja academy early he got mad not just you hit me mad but pissed mad but his father only replied


"Shigeki don't get mad and beat everybody up try to make friends!" Now that really got Shigeki going he pushed aside his chair and stormed out but it was really dark but Shigeki was very stubborn sometimes so he didn't go back he just kept on going until some random drunk came up to him Shigeki was so mad he ripped out his jutsu fire style great fireball. The jutsu obviously backfired Shigeki pushed himself up all burned and his clothes ripped . Right now Shigeki was just running not knowing where but just wanting to get away from everybody and everything.

After about an hour or two Shigeki had calmed down and was trying to figure out where he was uh-oh thought Shigeki now I've done it I'm outside of the village. Shigeki turned around and was walking toward the village when a shinobi appeared in front of him with no headband on. "AUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHH HELP A ROUGE NINJA!" Shouted Shigeki at the top of his lungs


"don't worry kid I won't hurt you" but right after he said that there was a splurt of blood and the ninja fell down dead.

Standing right there was his sister with her sharingan activated breathing hard His sister threw a question at him "are you okay?"

"Umm... yes ....a-a-nd thank you," Her reply was just a smile she took his hand and they walked back home. Now Shigeki wanted to go to ninja academy to be as strong as his sister.

The very next morning Shigeki woke up the dew still on the leaves and for the first time enjoying the scenery when he got to school he walked in and introduced himself but only the teacher was there and he had a big smile on his face "oh the new Uchiha boy early I see" said the teacher "please have a seat everybody else shall be arriving in a minute or two." He was dead on right in two minutes everybody rushed in like a stampede people were murmuring looking and pointing at him. Great thought Shigeki first day and I'm already the center of attention but all in all Shigeki enjoyed it and the teacher was surprised at how smart he was.

The next day he came to school at the regular time but he sensed something special today and something special did happen. At lunch time a boy was being bullied and when Shigeki saw him he jut knew they would be best friends he ran into the fight beat up all the bullies with ease leaving everybody stunned. Shigeki took the boy to a table and said "why didn't you fight back"


"Because I'm scared" from their on it was silence and they did become good friends best friends actually and Shigeki got popular very quick but Shigeki didn't like the popularity it was the wrong type it was fear not friendship. Shigeki could only trust Sakro his best friend.

Over the next month Shigeki had real friends he was special he had to accept it but nobody said anything Shigeki thought his life was coming along well and with the test coming soon he could study with Sakro and hopefully they would be in the same cell. The teacher had called upon Shigeki and told him that he would be taking the test early because of his skill. The only word Shigeki could think of was a big fat NO "no i want to take it at the original time!"

"Well that's your choice" said the man whule pulling up his glasses and he was right it was his choice.[timeskip 5 months] Today was the day of the test Shigeki went to sleep late studying and he woke up early when to Sakros house and they went to school. The tests were passed out quietly and nobody spoke Shigeki looked at the questions then almost laughed such easy question so he zipped down all the answers handed his paper in then did a transformation and a clone. Nobody finshed after Shigeki until at least 10 minutes Shigeki was playing around with his pencil when he saw Sakro struggling he wanted Sakro to pass to. Sakro seemed to notice Shigeki he smiled at him then looked back at his work and suddenly he knew all the answers he wrote them down handed it in and did the clone and transformation it seemed easier but anyway he took a seat beside Shigeki.

"Yes!" Half yelling said Shigeki him and Sakro had passed and shortly after they got their headbands.

Genin arc

Shigeki had passed his academy along with his best friend Sakro and they luckily got put in the same team they got a really nice teacher but he was very strong and strict about training but it was also fun and he didn't only train them phsycally but mentally too so they had become the strongest genin team of their year. They got a mission to pick weeds Shigeki was sad he wanted extreme he wanted adrenaline. But when his sensei found this out he chuckled out

" ahahaha well that isn't going to be happing for a long time if you don't get much better and do easier missions like these!" That really pumped Shigeki up "Ok guys lets get going!" When they reached the weed field Shigeki sensed something like a big chakra and sensed it would be more fun then he thought when they started picking weed a silver flash flew by Shigeki"s face. The next thing he felt was a warm liquid pouring down his nose blood was his first thought he quickly shouted "duck there is another ninja here to attack us!" everybody ducked except his sensei who did some handsigns which released a fireball which made quick work of the ninja.

When they got back Shigeki's sensei said that they would all be learning new jutsu today and they did Shigeki learned most of his fire jutsu then. His sensei asked to see him and Sakro they went into a corner and he learned that they were both going to the chunin exam selection's. That cleared up why he was making them train so hard today Shigeki thought

Shigeki and Sakro passed the test easily as they were very smart so they had spent the rest of the time making a battle plan and the plan was Sakro would try to get attacked but that would only be a clone and Shigeki would use a fire ball after Sakro had thrown two kunai to give a fake position away.

The plan went almost exactly how they wanted it but Sakros kunais didn't give the enemy a fake position so it ended up in close to close battle. Shigeki had to use another fireball make a lot of clones which left Shigeki with almost no chakra left and also meant they were in danger but they both did became chunin but barley


Chunin arc
Shigeki was so happy he could break into tears at any moment him and Sakro had passed together again and now they were chunin. They both went home fell asleep even though it was only 4:42.

When Shigeki found out his next mission was a b rank and with Sakro he was way to happy maybe even a little to much. He was trying to get there so fast that he used body flicker jutsu which he had learned after his last serious mission when he got there he walked in went into the mission room and their was Sakro a jounin and two other ninja who Shigeki couldn't identify. Shigeki hated waiting so he said "c'mon hurry up and tell us our mission!" The hokage didn't get mad he just replied "Ok i will well you must go into the land of sound infiltrate their defenses and find out what they are planning oh and i forgot to add if you complete this mission you will all be a permanents squad doing A and B missions," . Shigeki's eyes lit up yes he thought I will be reunited with Sakro.

As soon as they got to the sound village they encountered 4 Jounin "oh snap already O.k V formation! " Said their Jounin leader they quickly got in their positions their leader threw two shuriken Shigeki and Sakro made some kage bushins which transformed into kunai but secretly Shigeki and Sakro were made into kunai to and clones took their places. the Jounin easily dodged so Sakro and Shigeki untransformed threw a kunai into the back of the Jounins heads but Sakros just disappeared there was a nice clean shunk a shout of pain and a thud all at the same moment beside Shigeki.

When Shigeki looked beside him there lay Sakro with a sword through his heart Shigeki fell down on his knees just as Sakro was breathing his last he managed to whisper out " Shigeki your eye's ..... their red" and with that said he breathed his last and died right there but at least he died bravely thought Shigeki. But a rage filled him a rage like he had never felt so many memories came back to him but one stood out the one where Sakro and him had first met and he said "because I'm scared".


Right there and right then Shigeki Shouted "I fear no one and live life free!" . With that Shigeki went in for the kill battle seeming easier to see what the enemy was doing. Shigeki was weaving in and out throwing punches and jutsu Shigeki's team was doing nothing to help but it didn't seem like he needed it. Shigeki did 5 hansigns appeared behind the enemy "say bye-bye."
Threw a kunai knife did some more handsigns blew out a gigantic fireball and terminated the Jounin.

Jounin arc:

When Shigeki got back from the mission carrying Sakro's body he was called to the hokage's office but had to leave the body down in the lobby when he got into the hokages' office she looked at his eyes gave him a paper which had some lines on it to sign. Shigeki sadly signed and when he read it through he found out he had become a jounin all he did was throw the papers back to the hokage and with out a word just left leaving the hokage thinking why wasn't he happy.

7 months later Shigeki had learned the Raiton element because Sakro used to use it so in remembrance he learned it. "Shigeki-san Shigeki-san the Hokage has to have a very Important talk with you!"

"Ah not again wonder what it is this time probably two genin need some lessons B-ooooorrriiinnng," Shigeki ran off full speed wanting to get it over quickly. When he arrived he didn't even need to talk to the lady that set up talks with the Hokage because he had been here so much. "Yeah Hokage-sama you need something from me." Sighed Shigeki

"Why yes there is oh and you might like it this time It's a S-ranked mission and with a chance of you becoming a elite Jounin!" Said the Hokage with no expression on her face

"You don't seem to happy about that well the I'm off bye" By the time the words were out of his mouth he was already flying out through the window Shigeki set off to work as soon as e got there getting through defenses knocking ninja out finally he got to the Kazekage. "the Hokage has a letter for you" Shigeki handed Him the letter and left he now knew why it was a S-ranked mission the villages were enemies.

Elite Jounin
As the Hokage had promised he had become a elite jounin a S-ranked ninja and he had learned some new jutsu as a reward and he had a epic face off with the hokage which led to him becoming her apprentice and they trained so hard he unlocked sharingan three tomoe .current





RP Sample: “You ready Mirashi? I’m gonna make sure you can climb trees before they finish their drill.” said Kyosuke, Mirashi was now happy because he thought that he would be near their level before the lesson even ended.

Mirashi was completely calmed down now he pushed everything out of his mind except for putting chakra to his feet he finally thought he had it so he started walking toward the tree. When he reached the tree he put one foot on it then the other he was doing it he really was he couldn't believe it but because he was surprised he lost his concentration and the next thing he knew he was lying sprawled on the ground. "Sorry my mistake I lost my concentration.", Mirashi focused all his chakra down to his feet again. It all seemed easier now for some reason but Mirashi thought oh no if he kept losing concentration he would never get this exercise done so Mirashi walked a little faster then before

Mirashi had successfully walked up the tree and reached his sensei and said this before he attacked "ready sensei?". Mirashi took one quick little jab at Kyosuke's right thigh but never intended to hit he wanted his sensei to dodge to the left and Mirashi already had his left fist out. It seemed like Kyosuke had known he would have done that because instead of dodging to the left he ducked backwards, wow Mirashi thought such speed reflexes and chakra control to dodge that. But right after Kyosuke had ducked Mirashi grabbed his leg pulled made his sensei fall down and with no mercy with all his force took a punch to Kyosuke stomach Mirashi thought that if he really was a jounin it wouldn't hurt alot.

Mirashi heard Sakro giving up on his and Tsuchi contest so he said "I guess Tsuchi won" Said Mirashi.


So far is it good or needs more detail? plz answer and if the pics don't appear plz tell me answer please thank you


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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Shigeki [Elite Jounin]   Thu Jun 11, 2009 11:59 pm

--> No Mangekyou Sharingan on applying, sorry.

--> Raikiri and Tajuu Kage Bunshin - not allowed, sorry.

--> Academy Arc needs to cover history longer than a couple of days - this is where you record how you progressed through the academy. You can have less detail than you've put so far, though.

--> Genin Arc needs to be far longer.

--> Chuunin and Jounin Arcs are missing (I'm aware that this is a W.I.P, though).

--> Personality needs much more length for an Elite Jounin.

Everything else looks dandy. Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Shigeki [Elite Jounin]   Fri Jun 12, 2009 1:50 am

thank you but where did i put that i had mangekyou and I put in chidori but you didn't say anything against it i though it was restricted/banned
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Shigeki [Elite Jounin]   Sat Jun 13, 2009 10:11 pm

Mangekyou is under clan information.

Chidori Nagashii and Eisou are less overused. If they become too regular, I may have to restrict or ban them too, but not yet.

Still need Jounin arc.

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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Shigeki [Elite Jounin]   Sun Jun 14, 2009 12:04 am

ok edited done everything hopefully it's ok now May you check it
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