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PostSubject: An'barak Unthor- Akatsuki- WIP   Sun Jun 14, 2009 6:02 am

Name: An’barak Unthor
*Age: 29
*Gender:Male
*Height:6’3”
*Weight: 150
Appearance: Despite his height, An’barak is a very frail and weak looking person. He is remarkably skinny, not to the point that he looks emaciated, but it is still strange to many onlookers. His Hair is Jet Black, and cut short, only covering his head and ears. He has one long black scar which runs from his right eye accorss his nose and down to his left cheek. He may have at one point been attractive were it not for the scar. His skin is very pale, and those who are near him often have a feeling of unease, though they are never sure why.

Personality: Many think An'barak to have no compassion for any being other than himself, and those many would be right. An'barak cares for little other than what he covets most: power. His lust for power is remarkable, and it is only in the pursuit of more power that he joined the akatsuki. He is greedy, and malevolent, carrying little about his compatriots in the akatsuki, but paying them due respect. He is collected on the outside, but he is internally driven by his undying desire for power. He is extremely intelligent, and calculating. But he usually tries to hide this fact, so that he is not given any more duties within the akatsuki than he needs to, and he can pursue his own personal amibtions.

RANK INFORMATION

*Rank: Akatsuki
*Village: Formerly Konoha
*Specialty: Main: Nin Sub: Gen
*Element: Fire, Shadow-described in kekkei genkai

CLAN INFORMATION

*Clan name: Unthor
*Clan symbol: (Not mandatory)
*Kekkei Genkai: The clan of Unthor has always been obsessed with one thing, demonic powers. This obssesion lead to the creation of many jutsu and tomes on how to summon, and manipulate demons, and leads to a variety of demon based techniques.
*Clan History: The clan of Unthor was supposedly founded over a thousand years ago. Supposedly, its leader one day met a demon and survived the encounter. Astonished, and amazed by the power of the demon, the man, whose name was Ner’zhul, decided to dedicate his life to researching these creatures. He became more and more obssessed with obtaining the powers of these demons, that one day he developed a way to summon the creatures, but was unprepared and killed by his own summoning. His heirs however, never gave up the work their father started. They too began to hunt down any knowledge on demons they could. They developed methods of controlling demons, and even methods of manipulating their powers. The research and knowledge continued from generation to generation, each delving deeper into the mysterious powers of demons. Generations passed, and the greed of the clan became even greater, some sought to even drain demons of their energies and use it for themselves. Summonings became regular, and almost every ninja within the clan learned how to use the art of shadow magic, an element of technique which had been previously only possessed by demons themselves. Finally, a demon lord named Kil’jaedan decided the clan had stepped too far. He whispered in the mind of a young clan member Illidan. He coaxed Illidan with promises of power and managed to convince the young Unthor to summon him. After he was summoned, the demon turned on the clan, with powers beyond imagining and destroyed most of the members. The tattered survivors gathered what books and records they could, so that the knowledge of countless generations would not be lost, and fled to Konoha, where they sought refuge. The hokage accepted them, and their dark jutsu, provided they kept themselves under control. However restraint was not commonplace amongst the Unthor, but they managed to keep their place in the village due to the superior military might they brought to the battlefield, with demonic summonings and powerful shadow techiques. However, many Unthor have gone rogue, as from birth clan members become infatuated with power, and always are coveting more. The clan has flourished, but never regained its former glory. Until one day, an Unthor at the age of 21 named An’barak, suddenly turned on the Unthor library keeper, killed the man, and took everything he could from the library, burning the knowledge which he could not bring. Afterwards, the man killed the elders of the clan, so that the demonic arts would be lost to a certain extent, though a few young members survived his culling, and still live within konoha, and several other rogues are still alive.

*Secret Clan techniques: Note: this accounts for the vast majority of An’barak’s jutsu


Name: Demonic Art: Shadow Bolt
Rank: C-B
Type: Nin
Element: Shadow
Description: After performing the hand seals, the user extends his palm and fires a bolt of dark energy towards the target. The bolt is black and purple, and takes the form of a laughing skull appearing to leave a trail of black fire. This energy erupts and envelopes the target upon contact, causing the enemies life force to be drained. Being hit with this repeatedly is lethal, survival is dependent upon the opponents chakra levels.

Name: Demonic Art: Void Bolt
Rank: A
Type: Nin
Element: Shadow
Description: After performing the handseals, the user points his hand forward, and releases a dark bolt of black energy. This bolt of energy is similar to the shadow bolt, but far superior in power, and speed.

Name: Demonic Art: Chaos Armor
Rank: S
Type: Nin
Element: Shadow
Description: This is generally applied before combat, and has no drain effect on the users chakra so those who are capable of using it can use it all the time. When it is used, it will appear as if dark green lava flows over the users entire body, then hardens and disappears. This ooze is full of demonic energy, and increases the potency of the user’s shadow attacks, at the cost of preventing the user from using non shadow techniques. While active, it is used as a passive protection from any attacks. It can block most Jutsu up to a-rank, but it is easier to pierce with pinpoint attacks. Additionally, if an enemy uses taijutsu against it, the demonic liquids will try to flow over the attacking body part, and bind the enemies limbs. These liquids are very hard to get off without using any suiton techniques, and also will slowly burn away at an enemies skin until removed. When the armor is damaged, the user can use chakra to repair it, however this has a high chakra cost, generally equivalent to the strength of the damaging attack (if you hit the armor with a c-rank, c-ranks worth in refreshing)

Name: Demonic Art, Chaos Bolt
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Shadow
Description: The user extends their palm, and fires an intense, powerful, bolt of bright green shadow energy, that burns upon contact. This technique is unusual in the sense that it is unaffected by blocking techniques of any sort, and indeed can pass through any barrier, therefore making the only way to avoid it through dodging, or hitting it with an offensive technique of equal power. This can only be used in demon form. – explained later

Name: Immolate
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Shadow
Description: The user performs a sequence of handsigns, then slam their hands on the ground. A patch of fire will appear, which then moves rapidly towards the target. These flames upon contact will rapidly set the target alight in purple fire, which melts flesh quickly. However, this technique is defeatable by destroying the patch while it is enroute, or moving a great enough distance away that it will wear itself out before reaching you. (patch moves at about average human fast-run speed, lasts for 50 yards of motion.)

Name: Swarm of Angry Gnats
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Shadow
Description: The caster throws several shuriken, then weaves a few hand signs and performs the jutsu. The shuriken become enchanted with dark energy, and move according to the caster's will for 2 posts. Can control a max of 8 shuriken. Can only maintain control for up to 30 yards of range.

Name: Void Zone
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Shadow
Description: The user focuses upon 2 specific areas of ground, and then weaves hand signs. After the series of hand signs are complete, these areas will erupt into shadow energy, almost garunteedly killing any inside. Avoiding this technique is simple: Move. The blasts only cover a 1 meter radius each.

Name: Doom blossom
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Shadow
Description: The user creates a sphere of shadow energy, which, after being created slowly begins to move around, and targeting any nearby enemies, which it then fires repeated B rank shadow bolts at, until it is depleted. This technique lasts for 10 bolts, is very slow moving, and can be destroyed by any B rank attack or 2 C ranks.

Name: Shadow Bolt annhilation
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Shadow
Description: After performing a fairly long sequence of hand signs, the user extends his fists, crosses his arms, and then rapidly uncrosses them, as if throwing kunai. With this motion, a hundred shadow bolts shoot forward and blast an area, generally eradicating all life within it.

Name: Shadow Fire
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Shadow
Description: It looks to be a basic fireball jutsu, only the flames are black, and the fireball is much larger and far more deadly. When caught in the flames, the flames bypass the skin and burn directly at ones flesh and innards, thus being capable of causing far more damage for more rapidly.

Name: Shadowfury
Rank: A
Element: Shadow
Description: the user targets a specific area and launches a condensed, cone shaped mssile of shadow energy. This energy moves somewhat slowly, but can be controlled in flight to a certain extent. Upon landing, it explodes killing all weaker life forms in the immediate area, and creating a void zone.

Name: Soul Drain
Rank: C
Type: nin
Element: hadow
Description: All members of the unthor clan early on learn the art of soul draining. The Art of soul draining allows the caster to steal the chakra from an enemies soul in the moment of their death. The enemy must have just died, or be dying for this techinique to work. The caster weaves several hand signs, and creates what appears to be a blue cord between their palm and the target. This technique proceeds to steal out the targets soul as they die, and capture its energy. This creates a dark piece of what looks like a glass substance. The caster will generally store this. This is called a soul shard. These shards are used as an additionaly source of chakra or energy when summoning creatures, allowing low-level Unthor members to cast techniques beyond

Name: Curse of Agony
Rank: A
Element: Shadow
Type: Gen
Description: The caster weaves several handsigns, and then points at the target with two fingers, activating the genjutsu. This genjutsu triggers all of the nerves within the body and causes each one to suffer an intense amount of pain. The pain is such that this can make even tenacious opponents beg for death.

Name: Curse of Exhaustion
Rank: B
Element: Shadow
Type: Gen
Description: The caster weaves several handsigns and must say the word 'cripple' to cast the genjutsu. After it is cast, the target will suddenly start to feel very tired, and their motions will become lazy and slow.

Name: Shadow Nova
Rank: B
Type: Nin
Element: Shadow
Description: The caster weaves a few quick handsigns and releases a blast of dark energy around himself for about a 5 yard radius. This blast does do much damage, but knocks enemies and allies alike back a great distance, almost 50 if they don't recover in flight.

Name: Haunt
Rank: B
Type: Gen
Element: Shadow
Description: The caster must weave several handsigns and make eye contact with the target. The enemy will begin to believe they are seeing and hearing demons and laughter out of the corner of their eyes, or ghosts depending on what the person is more afraid of. However, as soon as the enemy tries to look at the source of the vision or noise, it will dissapear, causing great confusion and fear. These visions and noises distract the enemy and can cause them to lose focus with great ease. Lasts 5 posts or until dispelled.

Name: Death Coil
Rank: B
Type: Gen
Element: Shadow
Description: The caster weaves a single handsign, and must catch the targets eyes even if only for a moment. After they have caught eyes the target will suddenly come under the effects of the technique. They will generally feel as if they have death itself, wrapping it's icy hand around their neck, or whatever is their greatest fear of dying depending on the person. This technique can often leave the enemy paralyzed with fear, creating many openings.

Name: Demonic Summoning: Doomguard Squad
Rank: B
Type: Summoning
Element: Shadow
Description: The user weaves handsigns for a few seconds then slams down on the ground. Instead of creating a cloud of white smoke however, the demonic summoning creates a dark portal behind the user, which appears to be held open by dark claws ripping at the fabric of the material world. From this portal, Four immense, muscular demons Emerge. These demons have strength far superior to that of a human, but are slow. Each one is large, and orange, humanoid except for the head, which has several large slender Spikes emerging from the top. Each one carries a large sword, which is immolated in green flames

Name: Demonic Summoning: Voidwalker
Rank: C
Element: Shadow
Description: One of the most basic summonings, the caster creates a small portal, thru which comes a creature of pure shadow, that looks like a blob of black energy with arms. This creature is capable of no Jutsu, but is very good for protection. It is fairly strong, but the material it is made of is very dense, yet at the same time flexible. Thus the voidwalker is often used for the protection of the summoner from physical or weak jutsu attacks.

Name: Demonic Summoning: Felhound Pack
Rank: A
Element: Shadow
Description: the caster opens a portal, and summons forth a group of Felhounds. These felhounds, are designed for anti ninjutsu enemies. They are capable of absorbing a vast amount of chakra from a person by using the tentacles on their forhead. They can even absorb techniques up to B-ranks. The downside is they are weak against physical attacks. The tenctacles can be torn off with ease, via cutting or even yanking. The felhounds are weak against physical attacks, thus making them hard to use against opponents who do not rely heavily on nin or gen jutsu. These demons, as they are designed to counter users of such jutsu, are heavily resistant to both, and only the highest levels of ninjutsu or genjutsu will seriously damage/effect them.


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PostSubject: Re: An'barak Unthor- Akatsuki- WIP   Sun Jun 14, 2009 6:02 am

Name: Demonic Summoning: Pit Lord
Rank: S
Element: Shadow
Description: The is An’barak’s second most powerful summon The caster opens a portal, and summons forth a giant creature known as an annihilian, or pit lord. An image of such a demon can be seen here http://spicytunas.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/09/magtheridon.jpg. This demon is powerful, and therefore very, very unwilling to be controlled. It requires a large amount of the summoners focus to maintain control over it, else it would turn on the summoner. This demon is giant, about 30 feet from head to tail, and towering over 12 feet high. It carries a giant, double bladed sword, which has a hilt in between two giant jagged blades. The sword is huge, going 14 feet from tip to tip. The pit lord is very effective at using the weapon, and uses it with deadly efficiency and strength. The pit lord also has a few additional Jutsu:

Name: Rain of Fire
Rank: A
Element: Fire
Description: calls down several firey meteors to rain down upon the enemy or enemies.

Name: Chaotic Flames
Rank: A
Element: Shadow
Description: Launches a ball of blue demon fire which crashes into an area and sets a large patch of ground on fire which cannot be doused with water.

Name: Doom
Rank: S
Element: Shadow
Description: The pit lords mightiest ability, he launches a bolt of dark energy at the enemy. This bolt is actually a parasite, which then burrows inside the opponent. The opponent has two posts to destroy the parasite before it will detonate, killing them. The parasite can be destroyed by running a large amount of chakra through the afflicted’s body.
This summoning requires a soul shard.

Name: Demonic summoning: Eredar Demon Lord
Rank: S
Element: Shadow
Description: This is An’barak’s most powerful summoning, and requires several soul shards in order to cast. It requires all of his focus to maintain control over this demon. This demon has a humanoidal appearance, other than the fact that it has a beard of what appears to be tentacles, and hooves rather than feet. It’s skin is pale blue. The Eredar is physical muscular, and is also a deadly jutsu user. An'barak is not entirely sure he can control this demon, and is therefore very reluctant to summon it.

Jutsu's:

Name: Endless fear
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu
Description: The Eredar locks eyes with the target, and lets a grin slowly spread over his face. If the target maintains eye contact with the eredar, and sees the grin, he will see the demon (Fearful though he already is) Transform into a monstrosity. This inspires a huge amount of fear in any opponent, as if they are facing hell itself. Most opponents will either fall to their knees shivering, unable to do anything even as their death blow approaches.

Name: Soul Flay
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Shadow
Description: The eredar Attaches a tether to an enemies soul, and slowly drains it out, causing a huge amount of pain in the proccess as the soul is removed. However, if the target moves, the tether is broken. It takes 2 posts of no moving for the target to die from this.

Name: Finger of Death
Rank: S
Element: Shadow
Description: The Eredar's most powerful offensive spell. It will gather a huge amount of chakra on the tip of its finger, then point at the target. An Arcing beam of red energy will shoot from its finger towards the target. The chakra is of such great power that the surroundings are dyed red as the beam shoots out. This technique generally obliterates most targets instantly. It is avoidable/blockable, but very difficult to do so.

Name: Doomfire
Rank: S
Element: Fire
Description: The Eredar summons giant pillars of flame which move around the battlefield according to his will. He can summon up to 4 pillars at once. Each pillar lasts for 3 posts. The Pillars move at walk speed, therefore must be coordinated in order to hit a running target.

Name: Reign of Chaos
Rank: S
Element: Shadow
Description: The Eredar weaves several handsigns, and calls upon meteors of chaos to rain down upon his opponents. 5 Bright green meteors will appear in the sky and crash down upon a general area of the eredar's selecting (A circle with a radius of maybe 50 meters, the meteors aren't terribly accurate.) However, After the meteors crash down, they will come to life, in the form of one of the most monstrous creatures imaginable. They will become 5 infernals-- shown here http://www.warcraft3.sk/pics/races/undead/units/infernal.jpg. Each of these creatures burns with hellish flames and have immense strength. They will run rampant after enemies for two posts before collapsing.

Non-clan jutsu:

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse

Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

Other commonly known Techniques

Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water

Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed

Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

Name: Kai - Release
Rank: D-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D-S
Element: N/A
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.

Name: Goukakyuu no Jutsu
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.

Hateshiganairyuu [Eternal Dragon]
Rank: A
Requirements: 2 elements.
Description: After making a long row of seals, the user is able to summon a cloud of chakra which will then consume elements from the surroundings of the user to form a dragon. This dragon is controlled solely by the user and can cause huge amounts of damage and destruction to any given target. An'barak combines his own Shadow Jutsu with fire to form this.



HISTORY & RP SAMPLE

History:

Academy Arc: An'barak was born in the Village Hidden in the Leaves. From a young age he was respected and feared by other villagers for the clan he was born into. No one outside of the clan knew much about the Unbar save the clan members. This respect and fear later changed into hatred, and he was often ignored by his other classmates. Unlike students such as Uzumaki Naruto however, An'barak could care less about what his classmates thought. He was from a young age obssessed with one thing: Power, and how to obtain it. Whether this thirst came from the upbringing of his somewhat insane clan members who were fanatic with obtaining demonic powers, or simply the way he was born to be is unknown. He would always be found throughout the clans sector, reading old tomes, and studying new Jutsu. He was able to absorb the demonic arts at a surprisingly fast rate, one that even shocked his parents. He was an exceptionally talented student, intelligent and hard working. and the academy instructors grudgingly were forced to give him top marks in class.

Genin Arc: As a genin, An'barak was rejected by his other squad members, even their Jounin, who was constantly trying to give An'barak the hardest jobs, and just give him a tough time. An'barak was so possessed by his studies into his clan Jutsu, he could care less about his other squad members however. He didn't give a damn about them, and he was coldhearted from day one. The other two genin whispered about him, saying he was some kind of demon, a remark to which he smiled and said "I wish; being a demon would far surpass this weak mortal shell." The other genin lived in a state of fear and misunderstanding, and An'barak liked it that way. He cared so little for his squad members that he never even bothered to learn their names, though they were said repeatedly. One time on a mission, one of his two teamates was greviously injured, and begged An'barak to save him, given that the jounin and other genin had been away at the time. An'barak smiled, and instead of helping his teamate used him as a sample to complete his first soul draining. Upon the return of the other genin and jounin to the camp, An'barak simply said that the other squad member had died in combat, a story which the jounin never quite trusted. During the chunin exams, An'barak overwhelmed his opponents wiht brutal efficiency, and had no trouble advancing to the rank of chunin at the age of 14.

Chunin Arc: As a chunin, An'barak spent most of his time studying and training. He showed a level of obssession with power that his clan members had never seen before, and indeed even grew fearful of. His talent was undeniable, but his fervor was in many ways frightening. Over time he managed to calm himself exteriorly, but his lust for power remained unchanged internally. He was assigned several missions, mostly ones that were very very dangerous, due to the dislike his former instructor had spread amongst the heirarchy of Konoha. However, An'barak thrived on such missions, as they gave him ample oppurtunities to test the demonic powers he was acquiring daily. Indeed, these missions helped him advance himself, as it gave him all the more oppurtunities to collect souls for his later usage. The upper ranks of Konoha's leadership did not want to see such a man who seemed to have no compassion whatsoever for anyone or anything other than himself rise in power, but they could not deny how great his combat capabilities were, and decided that his worth outweighed his heartlessness and promoted him to the rank of jounin.

Jounin Arc: As a Jounin, An'barak began to realize the power he sought would not be attainable by being a lapdog of konoha. He decided that he had absolutely no choice but to leave the village if he wished to find the path to true power. His mind set, he began planning for his departure. The libraries of his clan still contained valuable information, and he did not wish to lose access to it. So he waited, memorizing as much as he could. Finally, after 5 years, he felt ready to leave. However, being selfish as he was, he did not want any others to have the power he had so painstakingly attained, and that meant he must exterminate his clan members. He could not afford to have any others who understood the techniques he used, after all, that would be a great weakness should konoha attempt to trace him down. So, he gathered up as many texts as he could from the library, and then summoned a mighty, uncontrollable demon before quickly fleeing. The demon ravaged his clan, killing most of the members, but was finally brought down by a group of Konoha jounin.

Akatsuki Arc: After leaving, An'barak roamed from land to land, searching for power. Eventually he was approached by the leader of the akatsuki, who promised him power beyond his imagining should he join the akatsuki. The Akatsuki desired his intelligence, and unique demon-style jutsu. Originally he was hesistant, but after the akatasuki leader showed him his own tremendous power, An'barak quickly agreed. Since then he has served the akatsuki, using it as a conduit for achieving his own dark aims.


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PostSubject: Re: An'barak Unthor- Akatsuki- WIP   Sun Jun 14, 2009 6:07 am

RP Sample: --- note i am Ezalor from Narutor and i am using a sample from there

An'barak watched as the Anbu rushed towards him, a grin spread over his features, the portal behind him still swirling with dark energy. He knew something about his missile that the Anbu didn't: it could be redirected. He cursed when the shinobi told Naruto to leave, and hoped that the bullheaded genin wouldn't follow his superiors advice. He observed as shadow clones appeared around him and the portal, but slowly pulled the missile away from its current course, and reaimed it at an area a little ways behind the Anbu who stood in front of him. A smug expression came over his face when the unknown ANBU "The akatsuki, though somewhat... Short of members at the moment is fine. Thank you for asking. Now if you don't mind I'm here to collect something so if you would be as kind... to.. stay out... of my way.." He grunted the last few words as he completed the summoning. Roaring forth from the abyssal plane, a mighty demon known as a Pit Lord, thirty feet of pure menace. The behemoth was such that the clones who had taken An'barak's back were crushed under his enormous feet. Just as the frontal clones were about to assault, the pit lord stabbed down with his giant, double-edged sword, creating a wall of steel just in time to block the attackers. Then, the sword was set ablaze in a chaotic green fire, easily burning away the two copies.

"An'barak." The demon grunted. "I should have known you'd be getting yourself into trouble." Hatred was obvious in the monster's tone, demons rarely enjoyed being summoned, unless they had a horde of weak enemies to devour. An'barak replied cheerfully. "Yes, now if you don't mind, I would like you to take care of that ANBU over there. And be careful, I have a missile incoming behind the fool."The demon let out a laugh, that sounded like a thousand bones crunching. "You needed me for one ANBU? You've gotten soft An'barak." however, An'barak tightened his control, and the demon stiffened, a scowl coming over its face. "Very.. well..." The demon then let out a blood curdling roar, and charged forward, spinning his blazing double-sword in front of him, heading in a beeline for the ANBU. Meanwhile, the missile drew closer behind the ANBU, where it would detonate around 10 yards behind him. "Lets see how you deal with this one, ANBU." An'barak muttered under his breath.
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PostSubject: Re: An'barak Unthor- Akatsuki- WIP   Sat Jun 20, 2009 4:26 pm

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PostSubject: Re: An'barak Unthor- Akatsuki- WIP   Thu Jun 25, 2009 12:09 am

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