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 Junsei Hyuuga [Akatsuki] [~Approved; ~Fox~]

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PostSubject: Junsei Hyuuga [Akatsuki] [~Approved; ~Fox~]   Junsei Hyuuga [Akatsuki] [~Approved; ~Fox~] EmptyTue Apr 28, 2009 7:00 am

General Information:

Username: Genesis
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Name: Junsei Hyuuga

Nickname // Alias: Genesis

Age: 18

Gender: Male

Weight: 150lbs

Height: 5"10

Appearance:
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Clan Information

Clan Name: Hyuuga

Kekei Genkai:
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Clan Symbol: None

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Rank Information:

Rank: Akatsuki

Village: Akatsuki


Skill Information:

Skill Specialty: Taijutsu/Ninjutsu

Elemental Affinity: Fire

Special Characteristics: None


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PostSubject: Re: Junsei Hyuuga [Akatsuki] [~Approved; ~Fox~]   Junsei Hyuuga [Akatsuki] [~Approved; ~Fox~] EmptyTue Apr 28, 2009 7:00 am

Jutsu

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PostSubject: Re: Junsei Hyuuga [Akatsuki] [~Approved; ~Fox~]   Junsei Hyuuga [Akatsuki] [~Approved; ~Fox~] EmptyTue Apr 28, 2009 7:00 am

Background Information // RP Sample:

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PostSubject: Re: Junsei Hyuuga [Akatsuki] [~Approved; ~Fox~]   Junsei Hyuuga [Akatsuki] [~Approved; ~Fox~] EmptyTue Apr 28, 2009 7:49 pm

Really impressive application, and THANK YOU for the clean and easily read layout! Just a small edit or two and I can approve you:

Hakkeshou Kaiten needs to be C-ranked; Jigyakkou no Jutsu needs to be C-ranked; Gentoushin no Jutsu needs to be A-ranked.

I'm aware that these aren't the official rankings, but unranked jutsu are subjective to the user's interpretation of them. Anyway, fix those and you're in. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Junsei Hyuuga [Akatsuki] [~Approved; ~Fox~]   Junsei Hyuuga [Akatsuki] [~Approved; ~Fox~] EmptyWed Apr 29, 2009 6:17 am

Thank you for the compliments ma'am, just trying to set a good example.

I have fixed the things that needed corrections, and request that I be allowed to move it, as I'm not quite sure how it works.
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PostSubject: Re: Junsei Hyuuga [Akatsuki] [~Approved; ~Fox~]   Junsei Hyuuga [Akatsuki] [~Approved; ~Fox~] EmptyWed Apr 29, 2009 1:48 pm

Well I'll do the official stamp of approval...

~Approved.

Now, you'll find a dropdown box and five circular icons at the very bottom left of the page. Use either the turning arrow (move topic) or select 'Move This Topic' from the box. It will take you to a page where you choose the new location of the thread. Don't 'leave a shadow topic'. If you put it under Akatsuki, then scroll to the bottom again and click on the stop sign button or 'Lock This Topic' from the box, it will lock the topic.

And voila.

~Fox.

P.S. I have to change the thread title when I move it, just so each app is clear who approved it (for administrative purposes). If you just go to the first post and click on edit - as a mod you can do that to others' posts - and change the title so that it has

[~Approved; Staff Member Name]

Then move it, lock it and you're done. Hope that's clear enough.
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PostSubject: Re: Junsei Hyuuga [Akatsuki] [~Approved; ~Fox~]   Junsei Hyuuga [Akatsuki] [~Approved; ~Fox~] EmptyThu Apr 30, 2009 2:22 am

Thank you.

Locked and moved.
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