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Konchuu Tenma
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| | Subject: Konchuu Tenma [Jounin] [~Approved; Night] Wed May 13, 2009 12:56 am | |
| General Information:Username:Konchuu Tenma- - - - - - - - - - - - Name:Konchuu Tenma("Konchuu"-Insect,Bug;"Tenma"-Demon,Evil Spirit;悪魔バグ;Tenma Konchuu) Nickname // Alias:Demonic HiveAge:15 Gender:MaleWeight:120Lbs.Height:5'5Appearance:Konchuu seems to have a strong resemblence to Konchuu's distance ancestor,Aburame Shino.He wears glasses for long range vision,having snow white hair.He wears the traditional Aburame hood,but also wears other clothing.He seems to have Blood-red eyes,wearing a black jacket,and a white tee-shirt.Konchuu apparently has a normalcy of wearing green jeans,having his headband around his arm.There seem to be no other ways to explain him,besides the fact he is very intimidating to his foes.
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Personality:Konchuu is a very silent type of person.He barely speaks,only one sentence per time.Also,he seems very smart:Not taking decisions that will burn him;having great plans.He doesn't really lose control of his emotions,which is one of the many good things about himself.This leaves him very closely related in attitude with his Great Grand Father,Aburame Shino.Clan InformationOnly complete if relevantClan Name:油女一族, Aburame Ichizoku Kekkei Genkai:The manipulation over common insects(Includes Kikais,Beetles,Flies,etc. EXCEPT FOR BEES & SPIDERS!)Clan Symbol:None is known.Clan History:The Aburame clan (油女一族, Aburame Ichizoku) is a clan characterized by their use of insects as weapons. The insects live in symbiosis within the body of the shinobi. At birth, members of this clan are offered to a special breed of insects as a nest, residing just under their host's skin. The insects can leave and enter through various pores, apparently by eating their way through the skin. The insects are called destruction bugs. They feed on chakra as a food source, making them quite deadly. The relationship between the shinobi and the insects is mutually beneficial. The host grants the bugs shelter and allows them to feed off their chakra, their body becoming a living hive, and in return the bugs do the user's bidding, allowing the shinobi to perform ninjutsu-like techniques without the use of hand seals or chakra conversion.
A female bug can be left on a target, which then can be tracked by smell by the male bug, or scout bugs can be sent out and return to tell the host information about the area. For this reason, Aburame clan members are experts in espionage; they can communicate with the bugs, and the bugs specialize in stealth because they make no noise or motion during combat. In addition to utilizing insects in battle, the Aburame clan also studies insects. They were rivals of the Kamizuru clan, the bee users, until they defeated them in battle. A major defining trait of the Aburame clan is that all of its known members wear dark sunglasses that hide their eyes as well as jackets that cover part of their face.
Rank Information:Rank:B/A(Intelligence Expert;Jounin)Village:Konohoagakure No Sato(Village Hidden in the Leafs)Skill Information:Skill Specialty:Ninjutsu(Secrecy & Skill Techniques;Main),Weaponry(Sub)Elemental Affinity:Water
[b]Special Characteristics:The Kikai Bugs,which live in Konchuu's body,have an immunity to any Water INSIDE Konchuu's body,due to the fact of Konchuu's element affinity being Suiton,and his Kikai Bugs absorbing his chakra.JutsuAburame Clan Techniques: - Spoiler:
Name:Mushi Bunshin No Jutsu~Bug Clone Jutsu
Rank:D
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:None
Description:This technique is a Bug-based variation of the Academy Skill,"Bunshin No Jutsu."So obviously,the Aburame clan member will form a clone of themselves,made purely out of Kikai Bugs.
Name:Mushi Kabe No Jutsu~Bug Wall Jutsu
Rank:D
Type:Ninjutsu/Defense
Element:None
Description:This is a defensive technique,utilized by the Kikai bugs that live in the Clan Member.By releasing the bugs,and having them fly at high speeds---a protective vortex is made.This protection may stop incoming attacks,but is stoppable by enough explosive force.
Name:Mushi Yose No Jutsu~Bug Gathering Jutsu
Rank:D
Type:Support/Ninjutsu
Element:None
Description:The Aburame Clan member will form the needed handseals,placing their hand on the ground.Then,a web of chakra is emitted from the fingers,luring nearby bugs to the clan members location---helping them in combat.
Name:Kikaichuu Shuriken No Jutsu~Destruction Bug Shuriken Jutsu
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu/Weaponry
Element:None.
Description:The Clan Member will form the needed handseals,and then Kikais will come out of the host's body---forming a Shuriken.Once it reaches close range of the target,it will disperse into the Kikais that made it up,attacking the target.
Background Information // RP Sample:History:Konchuu Tenma was born in the Shinobi Village of Konohoagakure No Sato,deep in the Fire Country.Sadly,his elder,Shino Aburame,was long dead,unable to train Konchuu on how to best use his bugs.Konchuu was more of a "Ne-er do well",getting into trouble alot during the Academy & Genin years.He'd usually use his bugs to do most of the work,not usually using his Physical Body to do much work.Although,someone did 'whipem into shape' around the following years.
Once a genin,Konchuu was placed in a squad with one of Rock Lee's "Youth Addicts",which was a real pain!That Sensei of his would go on and on about Youth.Also,he had teammates of a Hyuuga,and a Kamizuru.Most of the days in training,Konchuu would be forced to train Taijutsu,just in case he was left without Bugs or anything.Thus,he got Fit!
Chunnin Exams Arc:
The Chunnin Exams finally arrived for Konchuu! Konchuu was a sinch with the “Do NOT cheat” exam.He passed that part with flying colors,as well as the “Forest of Death” test.Also,he was placed against his Sensei in a Final Fight.The deal was,”If you can beat me…my youthful student,then you may be recognized as a Shinobi of Chunnin Ranking.”Those were the words his Sensei gave.And of course,Konchuu defeated his sensei,becoming a Chunnin.The Chunnin meant he was of greater status!No longer was he a runt!He was a more powerful runt!!Yeah,well...they're all douchebags for calling him that!Well,off he went to training!Preparing each day for the Jounin Exams to one day come!
Jounin Exams Arc:
After a few years of training as a Chunnin,Konchuu prepared for the Jounin Exams.He was more than qualified for the title,but needed to fight to earn his keep.Who else could he fight,but his fellow Chunnin Aburame Teammate.Thus,the battle began.The day was slow,the battle not lasting long,but it ending well for Konchuu.Yes!Konchuu became a Jounin,mostly because of his brains,and tactics.He was then known as a Sensei,not cocky like all the others,but...well..Kakashi-ish!Except for..the eye deal!Who knows what will happen with him being a Jounin?!!?!Do you?
Jounin Years Arc:
During his current life,Konchuu has spent a good time as a sensei.He has somehow become one of the smartest Shinobi in the Fire Country,farly surpassing Shikamaru's IQ.He has led most missions that require such knowledge,especially one of great importance.Then,came a recent A-Rank mission,in which enemy infiltration was a 'must.'The Anbu were none other than Paul Hyuuga,and Paul Uchiha!Yes,very strange with the same first name..I know.But,they were a great team,none-the-less!!!
The Mission Arc:
Konchuu was assigned to lead an Assassination,his fellows being of Anbu Title.He was assigned due to his superior knowledge,and tactic skills.They began by simply leaving the village,Konchuu sending bugs to scout the area ahead,able to warn him of danger.They were closing in on their target after multiple hours,stopping to set camp outside,where they spent the night---sleepping and planning their assault.Of course,Konchuu was busy all night,not needing sleep,but needing to make sure the mission went by smoothly.Which it did.They were able to infiltrate the enemy Nation,Konchuu's location kept a secret,the Anbus' killing anyone who spotted them.Konchuu used his stealth & strategy skills to get close enough to his target to complete the assassination.Yet,there was a good fight.Konchuu was stuck in the fight,his brains not enough to defeat the enemy.So..he had to listen to his gut!He followed what he felt,doing whatever necessary to kill the target.Happily,he survived,and killed the target.Thus,he learned that day to listen both to his 'head',and his 'gut.'He was asked to be an Anbu as well,but he declined!Why?I'm not sure,but maybe he'll join one of these days---being Head Anbu!For sure,he has the skill,but is his attitude good enough to handle such power."With Great Power,comes Great Responsibility."
Right Now..Arc:
Konchuu still lives in Konohoagakure No Sato,partly a sensei,but mostly a normal Jounin.He is the best thinker in his Nation,often giving advice to the Hokage when necessary,and the main voice of reason.What more could he possibly want in his life?How about respect...nahh he already has that?Maybe one day he'll become Hokage,atleast..that's his dream!Oh well..only time shall tell what shall be foreseen.
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| | | | Konchuu Tenma
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| | Subject: Re: Konchuu Tenma [Jounin] [~Approved; Night] Wed May 13, 2009 12:57 am | |
| RP Sample:
As Gale began seeing through it,Taimoshi quickly thrusted his 'Blade of Ashes' through Gale's back,and it emerged from his chest.Taimoshi grinned,the extreme pain surely capable of developing Gale's Tamoe three...afterall.The Blade cut a tear in a lung,the massive bloodloss,and slightly failing lung making his body in extreme pressure.Taimoshi walked over to Gale,smiling lightly,and not moving,holding out is 'Blade of Ashes';as if waiting for Gale to posses it."Quickly,use this to give me the needed damage so we might both receive the great power,and both of us may leave alive.." | |
| | | | Konchuu Tenma
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| | Subject: Re: Konchuu Tenma [Jounin] [~Approved; Night] Wed May 13, 2009 1:16 am | |
| Academy Jutsus: - Spoiler:
Name:Nawanuke No Jutsu~Rope Escaping Skill
Rank:E
Type:Support
Element:None
Description:Nawanuke No Jutsu is a basic Academy Skill that allows any shinobi to escape from a Rope Bind.
Name:Kawarimi No Jutsu~Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Support
Element:None
Description:Kawarimi No Jutsu is a basic Academy skill that allows any shinobi to avoid taking damage.In the technique,the user will swap places with an inamite object,or even another person.
Name:Henge No Jutsu~Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:None
Description:Henge No Jutsu is a basic Academy skill in which the Shinobi may alter their appearance.
Name:Bunshin No Jutsu~Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:None
Description:Bunshin No Jutsu is a basic Academy skill in which the Shinobi may make an illusion of themself in order to throw off any enemy.
Name:Bikou Ninjutsu~Shadowing Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Support
Element:None
Description:Bikou Ninjutsu is a basic Academy Skill in which the Shinobi may follow their target covertly.
Weapons: - Spoiler:
Kunai-
This throwing knife is one of the common weapons of a ninja. It is often kept in a holster on the leg in a pouch attached to the belt.
The Kunai can be used in conjunction with explosive tags and other weapons to form deadly combos.
Senbon (Needle)-
The senbon was first used by doctors in acupuncture, it was then adopted by ninja and Hunter-nins to hit points on the body to cause death, deaden limbs or cause their target to fall unconscious.
Shuriken-
Another common weapon, the shuriken is often kept in a holster on the leg or in a pouch attached to the belt.
Exploding Note-
The exploding note is a piece of parchment paper which has script on it that serves to faciltate its explosive properties. The ninja can attach the note to another object such as a kunai or log. When the note is set it begins a slow burn which results in a large explosion.
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| | Subject: Re: Konchuu Tenma [Jounin] [~Approved; Night] Wed May 13, 2009 2:32 am | |
| - More History.
- More Appearance.
- I think you can still have elemental affinity even WITH the chakra absorption.
- I think you SHOULD add more jutsus...seriously, otherwise, if you wan't, you can live with those....or not, you are Jounin..soo...
- Anywho, is the RP Sample the amount you ALWAYS write? It's good, but, I suggest you improve a little. Don't mind me. xD
- Btw, those weapons are usually found in a ninja pack, or whatever you call it, so, I don't think you'll need to add them here, unless you're making custom weapons.
That's about all I can find. Can't see the jutsus, so...can't contradict em'. xD | |
| | | | Konchuu Tenma
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| | Subject: Re: Konchuu Tenma [Jounin] [~Approved; Night] Wed May 13, 2009 3:31 am | |
| -Damnit,why more history?!!?I don't like that part!><
-I'm fine with doing more on the appearance,but not history!
-I'll post Suiton[Water Release] jutsus for a Chakra Affinity.
-Don't mock my RPing ><
-Ehh just so they know the Ninja Tools I carry | |
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| | Subject: Re: Konchuu Tenma [Jounin] [~Approved; Night] Wed May 13, 2009 3:35 am | |
| - More history is a for sure.
- YOU SHALL IMPROVE YOUR RPING...or else...xD | |
| | | | Konchuu Tenma
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| | Subject: Re: Konchuu Tenma [Jounin] [~Approved; Night] Wed May 13, 2009 3:53 am | |
| Edited The Stuff you ask,I'll finish with the Jutsu next. ._. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Konchuu Tenma [Jounin] [~Approved; Night] Wed May 13, 2009 4:24 am | |
| Suiton Ninjutsu: - Spoiler:
Name:Baku Suishouha - Bursting Water Collision Waves
Rank:B
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Suiton[Water Release]
Description:After forming the needed Handseals,the user will expel water from his mouth,quickly turning into a large volume of it.The user may control it by riding ontop of the waves.
Name:Daibakufu No Jutsu - Grand Waterfall Technique
Rank:A
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Suiton[Water Release]
Description:After forming the needed handseals,a column of water will circle the ninja,and then a large force of water will erupt to hit the attacker.Due to the force of the water,the target will be fully enveloped with the water,and at its mercy as it pulls them away.
Name:Daibakuryuu No Jutsu - Great Exploding Current
Rank:B
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Suiton[Water Release]
Description:After performing the needed handseals,a vortex of water will form,sucking anything on the surface above it down to the depths below.
Name:Goshokuzame - Five Sharks Eating
Rank:B
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Suiton[Water Release]
Description:After forming the needed handseals,the user will place their hand on the surface of the water.A shark of condensed water will emerge from each finger,to attack their opponent who is in the water below.
Name:Houmatsu Rappa - Violent Bubble Wave
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Suiton[Water Release]
Description:After performing the needed handseals,the user may expel a huge wave of water from their mouth.
Name:Mizu Bunshin No Jutsu - Water Clone Technique
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Suiton[Water Release]
Description:After forming the needed handseals,the user will form a clone that has the chemical makeup of Water(H20).It can carry out limited attacks,due to it having a Physical substance.If it gets injured or too far away from the original it will revert back into Water.
Name:Suijinheki - Water Encampment Wall
Rank:B
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Suiton[Water Release]
Description:After performing a string of handseals,the user shall blow out a jet of water from their mouth,blocking incoming attacks.
Name:Suikoudan No Jutsu - Water Shark Projectile Technique
Rank:B
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Suiton[Water Release]
Description:After performing a string of handseals,a column of water will rise from the nearby source of water,striking their opponents.
Name:Suirou No Jutsu - Water Prison Technique
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Suiton[Water Release]
Description:After forming a string of handseals,water will envelop the target,trapping them in a circular prison of Water.Note:The User must stay in constant contact with the prison.If they so happen to move their body from the prison,the inhabitant shall be set free.
Aburame Techniques that were left out: - Spoiler:
Name:Secret Technique:Insect Sphere[Hijutsu:Mushidama]
Rank:C/B
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:N/A[Water Release]
Description:This technique is one of the most powerful Aburame techniques known to the Clan.They will make their bugs completely cover the targets body,making resistance too hard to do.Also,they may feed off at the chakra,then eat the victim.Note:If the target gets away;which only happend once[Tobi/Madara by using a Time-Space Ninjutsu],then the bugs will follow the target instantly.
Name:Secret Technique:Insect Cocoon[Hijutsu:Mushi Miyu]
Rank:D
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:N/A
Description:This technique is known for the help in furthering the 'development' of the bugs that live in the Clan Members body.By encasing the clan member in an 'actual' cocoon,they may speed up the process of reproduction of the bugs---giving more bugs for combat.Note:It's dangerous to use in the midst of combat,due to the user being static,and vulnerable while using this particular Ninjutsu.
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| | Subject: Re: Konchuu Tenma [Jounin] [~Approved; Night] Wed May 13, 2009 10:46 pm | |
| Add 1-2 more lines to each arc of the history thing. And you'll be approved.
- You forgot to give Mizu Bunshin No jutsu a rank. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Konchuu Tenma [Jounin] [~Approved; Night] Wed May 13, 2009 10:56 pm | |
| Edi...................................................................................AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! | |
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| | Subject: Re: Konchuu Tenma [Jounin] [~Approved; Night] Thu May 14, 2009 12:17 am | |
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